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Evart
01-18-2010, 04:57 PM
Hi everyone. I want to introduce to you my newest poem, and the drawing that go along with it, titled "Haiti Cry."
I hope you all like it :)

Haiti cry...why Lord why!
Babies scared and hungry,
Why us Lord, why?
Thousands lay dead on the streets.
Those who are alive, don't have water nor food to eat.
Haiti cry...why Lord why?
Help is on its way,
the hopeful Haitian people, continue to pray.
Haiti cry...why Lord why?
God answered the prayers of the Haitians.
What they didn't have before, they now have an abundant.
Natural disasters happen all over the world everyday,
and human beings spring into action to help, without delay.
Haitians are strong, and they will bounce back.
The rebuilding of Haiti may take years, to get back on track.
The cries will turn into smiles as the people work together,
to help build a supporting government they can count on forever.
Haiti cry...thank you God, and thank you all who have helped us!
2010 Evelyn O. Simon. All rights reserved.

L Skylar Brown
01-18-2010, 05:13 PM
amen...................

Albert
01-18-2010, 05:17 PM
Amen................

Evart
01-18-2010, 05:56 PM
Thank you L. and Albert :)

Rob in Denver
01-18-2010, 06:25 PM
excellent Evart. From the heart.

Eileen724
01-18-2010, 06:33 PM
Absolutely compelling and thought provoking, Evart....this is a beautiful tribute to the Haitian people. It's incredibly moving and your painting of the young Haitian girl crying speaks volumes.

Evart
01-18-2010, 06:38 PM
Thank you Rob, and thank you Eileen :)

AT-TA
01-18-2010, 07:05 PM
Nice tribute to the Haitian people Evart and the girl you've painted is the embodiment of unspeakable pain and desperation...we will never understand why... why there must be cruelty in life included...so sorry for them...

Evart
01-18-2010, 07:31 PM
AT-TA, thank you so much for commenting :)

Peter Pinckney
01-18-2010, 08:43 PM
and Amen....................

JosepM
01-18-2010, 09:10 PM
Amen............

coops
01-18-2010, 10:14 PM
Amen..........

Caesar
01-18-2010, 11:43 PM
The most dramatic image, a crying girl, and the most moving verses to express desperation and hope ...:(
Dear Evart, a great entry from any standpoint!
Thanks for reminding us once more Haiti's tragedy we are following everyday in so many painful images and may our Lord take with Him the dead people and comfort soon the survivors with the help of every nation and person of goo will.

Peter McCullough
01-19-2010, 02:01 AM
The art is truly amazing Evart. You manage to capture all the pain this girl is feeling so effectively. It is really moveing

foxytocin
01-19-2010, 02:30 AM
Evelynn, thank you for sharing this.......both the words and image are so very sincere......

pai
01-19-2010, 02:31 AM
Very great art piece that passes strong message to the world. Expressive and touching me deeply both your painting and poem.

Alexandra
01-19-2010, 05:06 AM
Amen.
Dear Evelyn, this is such a touching poem and a beautifully painted image of this little girl in a state that we can't even imagine. Well done!

elfme
01-19-2010, 05:37 AM
Inspiring tribute Evart. Disastrous tragedy with unspeakable loss of life. Let us keep all of those folks in our prayers.

Valerie
01-19-2010, 08:01 AM
and I also Amen

Lima
01-19-2010, 10:01 AM
Evelyn:eek:

Sketchism71
01-19-2010, 11:21 AM
A heart felt and very moving post Evelyn! Thank you!

Evart
01-19-2010, 12:20 PM
Thank you all so very much for viewing and commenting.

Fashmir
01-19-2010, 03:27 PM
Amen! Evelyn Amen!