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AT-TA
01-13-2010, 07:34 AM
Wanted to paint a pic with the children in action with it and came up with this...mostly oil brushes and knifes...one layer...please shoot if something compositionally wrong or if something else should be corrected...thank you for that.

Caesar
01-13-2010, 07:57 AM
This painting is magnificent and vibrating of colours and energy.
The triangular composition looks a good idea too with a sense of scattering and coming out of the running children.
I would just try to crop it slightly to the right and/ or to rather have one kid only on the right to balance it.

screenpainter
01-13-2010, 07:58 AM
It's really delightful. Full of joy of the children and the color palette is beautiful. It reminds me of Oriane's children at play series very much.
Only suggestion would be the front girl on the left her head is a bit too large.
I like the style of it so perhaps you could leave it that way and maybe it works better compositionally that way. It is just catches my eye after closer examination. Still beautiful piece and very expressive. You decide on the proportions to leave or change to more realistic. It is very delicious impressionism by the way.

AT-TA
01-13-2010, 08:14 AM
Interesting points and i apprecite your time Ceasar,gzairborne.I've done them in many different styles but this one i like the best... and Oreane i think likes this style also.... so... maybe after a time i get tired of it and will go in different direction after all...Thanks so much again.

screenpainter
01-13-2010, 08:19 AM
The style is beautiful. Wouldn't change a thing with that. Just beautful.

PaperTree
01-13-2010, 08:30 AM
Does look better with a smaller head on the first child. But I love the feel of the freedom the children feel while running. it is captured beautifully and is a joyful painting.

Alexandra
01-13-2010, 08:35 AM
Joyful and beautifully expressed in this wonderful impressionistic painting AT. I have to admit that I love this painting!:)

jonwood
01-13-2010, 12:12 PM
really nice piece.....reminds me of my grandaughter and her friends..

barnburner
01-13-2010, 12:38 PM
Beautiful painting..

Lima
01-13-2010, 12:58 PM
AT very nice and playful painting. Well done.:)

Valerie
01-13-2010, 03:56 PM
AT-TA this is wonderful, very cheerful, I love it

Sketch_Jr
01-13-2010, 04:04 PM
Nice painting! I liked the way that the kids were running. It looked like they were coming out of the picture!:):)

AT-TA
01-13-2010, 04:11 PM
Oh...Hi sketch junior,am so glad that the you like the pic. And i like your fish also..and the avatar you created is so funny....how old are you? And you must like drawing and painting... i did too when i was a school girl... so nice to meet you here. :):):)

AT-TA
01-13-2010, 04:53 PM
Thank you for your kind comments gzairborne,Alexandra,jonwood,burburner,Oriane,Vale rie,sketchjunior,papertree,Ceasar.

pai
01-13-2010, 05:39 PM
Nice painting! I liked the way that the kids were running. It looked like they were coming out of the picture!

Sketch Jr, Jaden, has said what it's in my thought right away when I opened your thread. It's so amazing how the youngest ones look at art then the adult ones. Very beautiful, joyful and alive. Great piece of art to me. :)

justjean
01-13-2010, 05:41 PM
what a happy scene you have painted Annie

coops
01-13-2010, 10:35 PM
Wonderful painting, I like it very much. The children look like they are having a super time as children should. Great painting:)

byroncallas
01-14-2010, 05:20 AM
This is a great, fully alive expression of joy. Wonderful. :)

AT-TA
01-14-2010, 12:06 PM
Pai, Jeanie, coops, Byron, so nice from you to have a look at this picture. Thanks a lot.:-)

foxytocin
01-14-2010, 01:54 PM
Can't help but feel good about life when looking at this one....

Evart
01-14-2010, 02:00 PM
This is a fun painting!

EB
01-14-2010, 07:39 PM
I liked this when I first seen it. I'm just a bit slow responding lately. My grandkids keep refocusing my attention.