View Full Version : I... Crave... Crits...

05-13-2009, 12:13 AM
Good morning/Afternoon/evening/night Everyone!

I've just started working on a pic, and i started to have some... Doubts about it. On what? Not sure... So i turn to you guys!
Can you spot anything at fault with this image? CAn you give me some hints on what i should put in/take away?

I'll put up some more images as i go, but for now...

Thankyou so much!
-Libby :o

05-13-2009, 03:43 AM
Very nice..It looks good to me, You have to make decisions on what you want it to look like since it's your painting...:)

05-13-2009, 05:35 AM
At this stage, since it's a simple, straightforward sketch, you can take this in any one of say, a BILLION directions. Since you are uncertain, maybe just start experimenting and see where the painting wants to take you? :)

05-13-2009, 12:42 PM
Two things... the ear is really small. The ear typically goes from the eyes to the mouth (check on yourself!) Also, the head itself doesn't seem to have enough volume to the back. But it's a very good try! Keep working!

05-14-2009, 12:22 AM
Thank you guys for your crits, Especially the bit about the ear! I never realized that before! :P

Anyway, i played around with it a bit and found three good pics...
Tell me what you think!