PDA

View Full Version : Dusk and Thunder (critique wanted)



Mordred
02-01-2008, 09:07 AM
Hello everyone.

I just started using artrage (the free version), and want to see if I can get any constructive critique on my first two paintings.

Thank you.

Gormash
02-01-2008, 09:18 AM
I love the first one! ^_^
The only critisism I can think of is that the background in the middle of the image is a bit bland compared to the ground and to the darkly menacing sky above the rift/cloud thingie.
I really love the light being cast on the ground and the way the shadows radiate out from the lightning.

The other image doesn't really grab me as much, but I really like the colourscheme. The only gripe I have with this one is the dark area on the middle of the ground. I think that the left edge of that image is a bit too "square", specially considering the lack of similiar edges in the rest of the painting.

That being said: Both are very well done. You have a flair for using bold colours, and I like it. ^_^

AndyRage
02-01-2008, 09:19 AM
Hi Mordred and welcome to the forums.
I saw your thread on the Something Awful forums. Thanks for that! We have a marketting budget of, oh, somewhere around nil, so we definitely appreciate all the word-of-mouth promotion of ArtRage we can get.

Mordred
02-01-2008, 08:37 PM
@ Gormash

Thank you for the constructive critique. I think you are right about part of the second painting being too "square". That kinda annoyed me as well.

I have a very easy time making a background/sky/clouds I really like, but from then on I don't know what to put in the picture. Sure, I have ideas, but they are often too complicated for me to dare risking destroying the painting by a lousy attempt at a farm/rock/river/whatever.

@AndyRage.

Hehe, you're welcome.

@Everyone else: I still need/want critque. If anyone has anything to say.

Gormash
02-01-2008, 08:51 PM
Then I highly recommend shelling out $25 for the full version as this'll give you layers to play with.
That way you could simply add another layer and try out your ideas, and if you didn't like it: Delete the layer and start over again. Simple as pie, and you get to keep the parts you're pleased with. ^_^

Mordred
02-01-2008, 09:10 PM
I might just go ahead and do that. It was payday yesterday after all :)

How exactly do layers work?

Caesar
02-01-2008, 09:16 PM
Welcome and an incisive start! :D
I would only suggest to possibly try also to use more sheet grains on the different elements, some more blending transition and some dominant tone appearing all over the painting to either enhance the complementary ones and/ or to harmonise the overall palette.
I'm sure You'll soon get acquantaited to the main possibilities given by AR and You'll improve significantly from a technical standpoint considering such a talented start! :wink:

AndyRage
02-01-2008, 10:24 PM
How exactly do layers work?

The layers in ArtRage work much the same as layers in Photoshop.
If you haven't used layers in a digital painting application before...
Image you paint a background. Overtop of that you place a piece of transparent plastic, on which you paint your mid-ground. Overtop of that you place another piece of transparent plastic on which you paint your foreground... That is how layers work. You can hide individual layers, make layers more or less transparenty, you can change the way layers blend with the layers beneath (imagine a layer that just lightens the paint colour beneath, or just darkens it for shadows, without changing the underlying colour).
You can name layers, group them together so you can hide them or move them all together at once. (Imagine you've used one layer for your tree, another layer for your bird, and another layer for your nest - move them all to the left a bit, or a bit smaller, or duplicate them all at once)

Layers are a means to paint overtop of other detail, but without committing them to being part of the detail. The give much more flexibility in experimentation and correcting things as you go.

Peter Pinckney
02-01-2008, 10:35 PM
Hi Mordred and welcome..................no criticism of your paintings from me.............just keep painting and surprise yourself.......I did just that and buying the full version was money well spent! Do it, you won't regret it!

Mordred
02-01-2008, 10:50 PM
@ Caesar and Peter.

Thank you for the welcome :)

@ AnyRage

Wow, thank you for the very detailed description. I might just go home and buy the full version today... layers sound like fun. Oh, and a little like cheating :P

Is_It
02-02-2008, 10:42 AM
really fine work,i like the mood of the second and the colors od the first. really intersting!

RobertSWade
02-02-2008, 02:10 PM
I rather like "Dusk". There is some very fine detail to the central subject and to the secondary trees along the left. Nice palette also. :)

AndyRage
02-02-2008, 06:13 PM
@ AnyRage

Wow, thank you for the very detailed description. I might just go home and buy the full version today... layers sound like fun. Oh, and a little like cheating :P

The full version has much much more. As well as more tools (airbrush, paintroller, paint tube, and glitter), and much more control over the existing tools (precise pencil, thinner oils, ArtPen...), you also get stencils and rulers, and you can pin reference images to your canvas. And more.
All for a measley 25 bux.