Belvrog....no probs.........I welcome constructive critism.......I try and bear it mind when i paint the next picture.......I think i will leave it....since i put lots of time into it .
Belvrog....no probs.........I welcome constructive critism.......I try and bear it mind when i paint the next picture.......I think i will leave it....since i put lots of time into it .
Enchanter
Draw what you see!....not what you think you see!!
My artist friend
We Must each think of ourselves as an endless work in progress....Harley Brown
Excellent Enchanter........![]()
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Thanks Bumble......I think your rose is still brilliant![]()
Enchanter
Draw what you see!....not what you think you see!!
My artist friend
We Must each think of ourselves as an endless work in progress....Harley Brown
Simply amazing stuff E.![]()
All - around awesome ^_^ I think you definitely succeeded in getting that "painterly realism" you were looking for.
"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away."
-- Henry David Thoreau
Perfect painting. 8)
Wow.
Nice demo.
Bartender, fix me a moon river. . .in a TIFFANY GLASS!!!!!!!
Woah that's cool!
One crit tho, you have these nice sharp shadows under the larger fruits but the grape casts none - you might want to add castshadows on the right to tie the image together a bit more.
Also ... on the pears, you could add a hint of a sharp edge were shdow meets light,near the center of the mass. It is very apparent on the reference you used and helps making the fruit rendering coherent with the general lighting (top down), kindof defining the 'B' profile of the fuit since light hits it twice - one time at the top, one time at middle height. I know I'm not very clear ... I can make a quick mockup/paintover if you want. I like to call that effect the 'butt dimple trick' if you see what I mean :P
Really a stunning beauty!
Last edited by screenpainter; 11-23-2009 at 01:23 PM.
gzairborne : thankyou for looking![]()
pior: Thankyou for your comments.......there is a shadow under the grapes but i guess i didnt extend it enough.........thanks for the paintover offer but i think i will leave the painting and think about doing another onei saw your website.fantastic stuff
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D Akey : Dear Dakey.....hope you are well..thankyou......i welcomed your observations if the WIP section........but i think i will use your comments for future still lives![]()
Levent Suberk: thankyou .good to see you......have you had anytime to paint?
Draco91: thankyou for looking![]()
RobertSWade: thankyou for looking![]()
Enchanter
Draw what you see!....not what you think you see!!
My artist friend
We Must each think of ourselves as an endless work in progress....Harley Brown